Does this sound like a good chapter? (Chapter 4)?

I think your pretty good, but it could be better, for instance, at the beginning of the story you said "like" a couple of times, and its really not needed. also, when you wrote, "Oh, there you are! I was waiting for you," she asked, , asked isnt the right word. It wasnt a question. Other than that, I'd say keep practicing, your pretty good :3